Friday, August 7, 2009

Now Feel Incomplete Comments

Rating: 4.7

i realize the person i was and perhaps am
unable to distinguish between fantasies and reality
pushed you with my hands into a sea of grief
never anchoring myself to stop and help you up
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ajith patnaik
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Ency Bearis 08 August 2009

wonderful thoughts greatly written...nice...

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Eyan Desir 08 August 2009

good write................10

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dr veenaa rai 07 August 2009

repenting and asking for forgiveness requires courage which u ve in ample...well done..

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Angela Michel 07 August 2009

Good job with this, conveys emotion clearly.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 August 2009

The sense of belonging that comes with love, is the most greatest feeling human could have had.Nice piece Ajith.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 August 2009

No one can make u feel complete........you are complete yourself.......realize it.........

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Chitra - 07 August 2009

a write filled with inner turmoil...a great self reflective write

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