Saturday, May 13, 2006
Now Do You See Who I Am Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I am a grain of sand
ready to be a piece glass
I want to make myself
transparent so that
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Aisha Sherazi
13 May 2006
I like the metaphor here, it is very well done. I pray we can all be the best we can be, we can't be better than that. Peace, Aisha
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Lydia Francese
13 May 2006
Don't you wish everyone was like that! This is heartfelt with emotion. A 10. -Lydia
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10/11/2025 7:46:31 PM # 1.0.0
I can see through you Cokbod, you're just a softy and a lovable being, and can't help being good. Good poem too. Love Ernestine XXX