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Rating: ★5.0

Long ash coats and cherry faces
say nearly, but not quite.
Long grey coats and beady faces
say tomorrow, maybe.
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John Scully
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Ramesh Rai 25 September 2013

I agree with Elin Grimes. best of luck.

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Elin Grimes 19 September 2013

I've been through a few contest entries now: this is the first one which I consider to be deserving of the Excellent vote. Just wanted you to know - I love the tone and structure and concise thoughtfulness of this (not to mention the refreshing absence of cliché.) Great entry, best of luck with the contest!

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John Scully

John Scully

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