Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Now Begins... Comments

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Now begins the pain.
The feeling of being stabbed in the neck over and over.
I cant breath,
I reach for help but no ones there.
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Samantha Rogers
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Raiyuken Senshu 02 April 2009

feeling of isolation, and not fitting in, very dramatic. I sense all your pain off of these lines... your poems all resonate the same crushed spirit, sad desperation.

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