Novus Actus Interveniens Comments

Wow! Chris! This is, IMO, superb! It's sharper...more biting....I feel as if I've seen into the farthest reaches of your mind, and dare I say, I blushed at the raw nakedness that this poem imparts. Should a reader 'know' this much about a writer he/she has never met? Very, very effective.

I really like this, Mr. Woodall, except the very last line. I think it flows beautifully, and is very leading, commanding the reader in a 'follow me' fashion - to someplace that promises to be stupendously sublime. I think the last line let me down though. I would work on it a bit. See if you can regain the 'flow' while still maintaining the 'punch.' Nice work. Very near perfection, IMO.