Friday, November 16, 2018

November Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

never mind the grayness
never mind the chill
sip the dreamy drizzle
of seasonal change
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

November rain takes place. We feel the seasonal change with chill sip and dreamy drizzle. A beautiful poem on nature and winter nicely executed.10

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Nadeem Ishaque 18 November 2018

In Eliot's Wasteland: April is the cruelest month, breeding Lilacs out of dead land, mixing Memory and desire, stirring Dull roots with spring rain. Winter kept us warm, covering Earth in forgetful snow... Your winter landscape has the dreamy drizzle of memories not forgetting. The warm embrace of Spring will follow although winter's arms may yet be cold. Wonderful writing!

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Kelly Kurt 16 November 2018

You are a natural poet, Nosheen. Always a pleasure to read.

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Bill Cantrell 16 November 2018

Clouds of nostalgia are full of memories indeed! A very pleasant poem, I hate the winter but thinking of fond recollections of happy times certainly helps

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2018

Hi, Wonderful poem... The graying days announce end of Autumn and the arrival of her colder sibling... And a rain hastens her exit... Lovely write.100++++

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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