November Love (My First Poem) (Two Versions) Comments

A full bodied, beautiful poem! Brilliantly expressed and so well embroided poetically. Lovely; D

such words from someone that has never written before means the person is a natural poet. which you, my dear, are. your words always expressed so elegantly.

obviously you are a born poet sir...born to be great...1970's piece.? great....a collector's item...while reading this, .i feel i exist already during that time or I'm in a time machine.......admire for keeping your composition til this time...a poet by mind and heart to keep its compositions til the end of time.......as the poet should be? ...thanks sir for sharing this to us...November love (its November) .....

this is what makes you a great poet sir.......there is nothing more to say...! !

There are two things that make a great poet: how the poet inspires the reader and in admiration if I could say 'I wish had written that poem'.Wonderful**********************~>

This poem is a fine example of why it is great to keep our written works. Just as we are always changing and growing, those experiences translate in our poetry. Great write then and now!

hi i love the november love poems not only does it speak truth but novembers one of my fav month andits my birth month

A very good start to your interest in poetry Greenwolfe, you obviously had the talent already, and all you needed was to put your pen to paper. Congratulations on this one, could be no better. Terrific. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Im still an amature so i kinda prefer the first version of it but still 10!

Let the time say, Green is a real poetic talent. Poetry has no frontier.It is beyond this planet.It is beyond galaxy and cosmos.Poets must live in future.

Very light, warm, and refreshing it felt like I was actually their which means you are a great writer, if you can take your reader to diffrent places Well done!

When im finished commenting on your work im going to favorite your poems

Wow! i seriously adore your writing...I can seriously learn from you.

Wow, Greenwolfe, wow. It truly has inspired me to pen my thought in verse. I never thought it would be so easy. But since it came right from your heart so it looks so easy. Anyway, in my case whether I fall in love in April or November it won't last long, ha ha aha. But your poem is fantastic. Now I am getting emotional thinking of my first love that failed. It still hurts. Where is my handkerchief? ? ? Take care. Cya. Keep smiling.

These days Poetry written in iambic tetrameter is rare, but here you will find fine examples of strong traditional rhythm and metre. November Love shows how a poet develops an 'ear' in his writing. Rgds, Ivan

the motion is fluid, the message is ripe; it makes me want to believe that this love does exist. the power lies in its rhythm which exposes the core of an almost alternate reality to the truths of love. whether young or old, we can all visualise such an experience; and the imagery makes it so.

hey great made me think but overall better than mine kool bye then

Its wonderful how you have put the poem into context of its past and how it stands in your mind as an important write. Its also wonderful how a reader can see the comparative of both old and new and see slight adjustments can make a poem to become a great poem. Your ability to write and form in the second verse does succeed to convey its message much better. Thank you, Mel

I actually quite enjoyed reading this. It is a very sweet poem- a sad bit in it about the falsity of some relationships- but it is very beautiful. I understand it, which makes it all the more well liked. Excellent job *smiles*

Excellent poem Greenwolfe both versions of the poem are quite good a 10 out of 10 here excellent work as per usual