November Comments

a.a sir ur new poem must b v good. but ur THIS NOVEMBER WS THE BEST PIECE. THE FORMER MIGHT Bbeyond my wisdom. urs WASEEM ABASS AKSSH 03226844045

divinity begins to show when we realise we have fallen and when we feel for such a bad fall..a poem with a good insight 10

kamran shb! honestly speaking i was'nt expecting a poem such great magnitude as this one is... im speechless after reading this poem.....i wanto say something abt it bt its too, strong would b a very small word. da depth, da insight that it presents...of human mind, of human soul....da utter sense of loss....gone....dead....lost....bt the yearning n da desire! ! ! extremes have been put together n this juxtaposition is simply superb. God is really great. wen out of nowhere one receives words to his/her sentiments, he/she feels exalted....

I really like the verse 13-16 that talks about the transformation and rebirth this November: This November The faith has to be revolutionized The fate must be renovated The fallen got to be resurrected. This is a dexterous poem. Great piece of art.

This is a very good poem - I greatly injoyed it.

Brilliance in work.....thoughts provoking in its simpliest structure...a 10.

Very beautifully written poem indeed. Loving this time of year when everything dies to in a couple of months spring forth new. Great piece!

An advance happy birthday wish to you. a nicely composed poem. true human beings should not fall from their status of humanity and should continue to grow in the right direction. well composed verses.

November poem talks about the fall of man from divinity to human level; Good, it should not fall further to animal level before rising to divinity again! Nice to read it hoping to higher level soon! All the best!

Dear Syed, A very eloquent verse nicely penned on 'November' your birth month. With your excellent choice of words you have weaved a poem to convey a complicated issue in a simple and lucid way. Well done and I give you a full ten.

and you rise high up! ! ! ! and touch the skies....: D...heeh...good poem....about your rebirth...good....keep writing, ....nd itz nice to know that you put your heart on the papre....heh

Very interesting poem about rebirth Have you read the introduction to the waste land ts eliott? Your poem reminds me of it Also excellent use metaphore

great simile write..on November thoughts on your natality..well penned.. Ency Bearis

Kamran, it is a great poetic exposition of the paradox of duality. In fact the humanity and the divinity are the two sides of the same coin, so are the rise and fall the same path of the hill. Only those who climb up can have a fall, only those who fall down will climb up again; therelies the true essence of life.

kamran you absolutely truthful to your self.

A month of much commotion, on the barren soils the seeds of life will sprout....the heart bloats and beats with fresh inflow of blood, the pulses will throb with a rejuvinated energy and lifeless busts will stir...A revolution will occur thanks to the pining mind of a redeemed poet.............u r a revolutionary poet kamran! Hats off!

happy birthday sir............and this one is a master piece........need i say more?

November is the most significance month for me too.' Happy birthday to you.......happy birthday to you............happy birthday, happy birthday..........happy birthdayyyyyyyyyyyy............to...............youuuuuuuu......! ! ! ! '. All the best to you in whatever you take! ! !

KAMRAN, ANOTHER WINNER. YOU USE THE LANGUAGE SO CAPABLY, AND SO IMAGINATIVELY AND SO DESCRIPTIVELY! OTHER PEOPLE HAVE QUESTIONED WHY NOVEMBER IS IMPORTANT TO YOU. I'M SITTING HERE WAITING FOR THE RESULTS OF OUR PRESIDENTIAL ELECTION. IF OBAMA, IN MY OPINION, DOESN'T WIN, THIS NOVEMBER WILL BE THE BEGINNING DAYS OF DARKNESS AND GLOOM FOR MANY, MANY PEOPLE. GREAT POEM, KAMRAN. YOU ARE A POET, TO BE SURE. THANK YOU. CAROL

Your November thoughts prove that this is a month of some significance for you. You are a fine wordsmith. Kindest regards, Sandra