November month of fog and mists.
The early mornings have a bite
the silver grass by Jack Frost kissed
in the dark hours of the night.
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Hey Ivor! Your becoming a celebrity! Your writes are Grrreat! (10) ! ! Thad
What can I say but 'Perfect'. A delicious piece of the very best standard. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
The tight syllable count gives this piece a nice rhythm-I especially enjoyed the line, the 'silver grass by Jack Frost kissed.' I lovely well crafted read here, Ivor. Debora
This is lovely! The sentiment, the senses, the language-all perfectly melded into a perfect form, a wonderful sonnet! Great work, Ivor!
This one's a keeper, well crafted and evocative. Nice work.
What a great way to lift the winter blues, one of your poems is the way i choose..10