Thursday, November 1, 2007

November Comments

Rating: 5.0

November month of fog and mists.
The early mornings have a bite
the silver grass by Jack Frost kissed
in the dark hours of the night.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 02 November 2007

What a great way to lift the winter blues, one of your poems is the way i choose..10

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Thad Wilk 01 November 2007

Hey Ivor! Your becoming a celebrity! Your writes are Grrreat! (10) ! ! Thad

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Ernestine Northover 01 November 2007

What can I say but 'Perfect'. A delicious piece of the very best standard. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Debora Short 01 November 2007

The tight syllable count gives this piece a nice rhythm-I especially enjoyed the line, the 'silver grass by Jack Frost kissed.' I lovely well crafted read here, Ivor. Debora

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Yen Cress 01 November 2007

This is lovely! The sentiment, the senses, the language-all perfectly melded into a perfect form, a wonderful sonnet! Great work, Ivor!

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Chris Mendros 01 November 2007

This one's a keeper, well crafted and evocative. Nice work.

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