Sunday, April 26, 2009

Notorious Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let the darkness rule, despotism may prevail,
Clock has struck thirteen, even a ray requires a tool;
Coin stands biased, dice shows seven,
The game has been set, mirror is not even.
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Kesav Easwaran 04 July 2009

freak imaginations...but power play words...hitting over the ropes line by line...you have the signs of a good poet...thanks...10

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Saumya Srivastava 04 July 2009

again gud thinking, gud vocab....gr8 piece

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C. P. Sharma 23 May 2009

Awesome poem. Beautifully transferred epithet from man to Nature. I couldn't find your third poem here. CP

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 April 2009

The world has ended but still nursing his wounds.Great piece Alok!

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Alok Agarwal

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