Wednesday, February 25, 2009

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Today I almost hit a car.
Well, the car almost hit me.
Barreling through the commuter lot,
At least twenty.
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Floyd Crenshaw
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Emily Jackson 25 February 2009

i love it i love it i love it! ! ! how true! seems to be a common coincidence put into lovely poetry!

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Samuel Pennell 25 February 2009

Floyd, this is excellent. I love the choppy nature of the later lines, brilliant! 10 Sam

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