Wednesday, June 13, 2018

Nothingness Comments

Rating: 5.0

While soul leaves his own body,
People say this body is a cadaver,
They gossip and relatives cry,
Attachment and detachment fight.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2022

An excellent philosophical poem dear poet.. loved it

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Isabel Pimentel 06 June 2020

Illusion covers all the matters and captures us. But each material thing is destructible. We should stay away from this and practice God’s wisdom. We have to realize the nothingness.

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Heather W.B. 05 June 2020

Nothingness to something and from something to nothingness it seems to very magical in the way of perception. Nature is wonderful and you have captured the right thing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 July 2018

A very meaningful write about life and death. So very true.We take nothing along with us. Brilliantly penned.10++++

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Red Soul 26 June 2018

True. It is hard to imagine what was before we were born, and what would be left after we are gone. Either ways, a life lived is a life lived. A beautiful poem Mr Mahakul. Thanks for sharing.

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Chris Embrick 21 June 2018

We take nothing that is material with us. The soul has no need of such things. Thank you Kumarmani.

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This is a poem that speaks of impermanence of the body. Once the soul leaves the body, of what use is it? It is important to reflect on death while you live. Kumarmani ji, this is a well written poem that speaks the truth.

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Unwritten Soul 14 June 2018

Poem like this only can be done with delicate heart and deep mind, beautiful work dear

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2018

While the soul leaves his or her own body! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 13 June 2018

An interesting philosophical view abut the passage from life to death.Very well written!

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Mj Lemon 13 June 2018

That we have knowledge can give us great insights. It can also, as your glorious words suggest, condemn us to a fate that perhaps we all wish might be avoided. Very moving, brilliant poem, Kumarmani.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 June 2018

Illusion covers veil over all matters, Material things attract frequently, But reality with change warns us/Destruction turns development into dust......I find a precious message here! A highly philosophical and motivational poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Alam Sayed 13 June 2018

A philosophical insight into the ephemeral nature of things.

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Robert Murray Smith 13 June 2018

A well thought out write. ++10

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A A Umar Udubo 13 June 2018

Nothingness indeed. You couldn't have pained it more palpable Sir. Life offers nothing and takes away everything. It is hollow and delusional. Soul... body... cadaver...illusion....confusion....development into dust....Sir here is my rating.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 13 June 2018

Sometimes I think intelligence is a curse- the animals do not fret about death and what happens after death. Even so, we a reasoning creature and as such we wonder and pursue theories and sometimes cannot see the truth before our face... very deep-thinking is created by this poem. Well done. 10

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A A Umar Udubo 13 June 2018

Curse of knowledge, or doom to knowing. It is both a curse and strictly speaking, a blessing- though one falls short of words to explain how.

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Nudershada Cabanes 13 June 2018

A well crafted poem Sir Kumar. You have captured the essence of death. When death comes soul leaves the body.10

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