Tuesday, March 29, 2016

Nothingness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loneliness said to me; Make me your companion
And shadow said to me; I am with you all the time
Time said to me; come and walk with me.
The one who never understood me nor became mine,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2016

Powerful thoughts on loneliness felt in life. A wonderful poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 30 March 2016

nothingness is fine when we are gone but in life it makes us all forlorn thanks Asim

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Nosheen Irfan 30 March 2016

Life is a bait for which all humans fall. Though it all amounts to nothing in the end but we willingly fall for the allure. Wonderful poem on nothingness. A perfect 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 March 2016

I am with you all the time! Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 29 March 2016

~Even I have fallen for the shadows that life offers. A deep poem. - 10

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