Nothingness Comments
From the day ‘I' viewed the first ray
All fell on line, to have paved my way
Being conscious of, the role ought to play
Treaded the path, idling, not a single day
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Take back all what you've given me Since then, never ever talk about me Remember me, if at all, only for the deed Devoted heart and soul, for you, indeed.....great theme. Haunting poem. Beautifully expressed. Congratulation for it was being selected as the poem of the day.
Thanks for this great poem, I especially liked the last stanza
Beautiful penning, loved the whole poem but my soul really felt for this line: Emerges NOTHINGNESS, ought not feel shy. Thank you for sharing.
Heartiest Congrats on the Poem Of The Day as also for composing such a beautiful and meaningful poem dipped in eastern spiritualism.
Amazing philosophical poem calling for nothingness after renouncing 'I' in the world. Loved reading it. I think the word 'sole' appearing in the last line needs editing. Thanks.
Thank you Rajnis for both your comment as well as showing the typos, which even I did not notice all this time. Thank you.
Very well done, Jayatissa. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!
Dear Jayatissa, It is a nice work and happy to read it.... My best wishes
Thank you Udaya. Lets keep meeting all the time at this wonderful forum, PH.
Beautiful and well deserved for member poem. Such words of wisdom! All of us sitting on the edge of time need to remember.Congratulations.
Congrats for this achievement, This poem truly deserves all applause.
Congrats on poem of the day. A state of nothingness depicted well. Things fall apart...that's life.
This is encouragement. Thank you Nosheen for your comment. I am moved very much by this hearty action of PH as well.
You were always an inspiration. Thank you for the encouraging comment.
The first ray! ! With the muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Remember me, if at all, only for the deed/// yeah; exactly; philosophical touch