Thursday, August 7, 2014
Nothing To Fight Comments
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Nothing to fight
Under naked night
It is much to delight
And feel right
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
08 August 2014
It's a good poem but it could be improved Ella Mae2 minutes ago I think it's a good poem, however I think you need to create more imagery and make the poem flow a little more. The rhyming seems like you have tried to base the whole line on the word, which doesn't make the poem flow as easily.
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