Nothing Should Bring You Down Comments

Good write, like this, got a bit confused in the second verse, as you use lad.. a change of perspective maybe

nice poem, i guess we all sulk a little when we are young adults and get a little criticism from our peers, but it is an important part of learning to take it on the chin and learn from it, costructive criticism that is, otherwise tell them where to get off, nice one.

I love the rhyme, the message, the poem and of all the poet! Wonderful work this is... Looking forward to your work!