Nothing Seems Right Comments

I stood on high wall of river bank Pain rushed to mind and I sank It was just matter of seconds for life to end High melody drama with current trend... nothing seem ssright .. good assertion....10

Nothing seemed perfectly right from beginning I could not believe it was end of an inning// nothing seems right...10

From: Lady Grace (philippines Philippines; Female; 42) To: Hasmukh Amathalal Date Time: 12/26/2009 10: 35: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: nAIIZ another nice poem dear..i didnt find errors in this...all i can say is this is a very nice piece..just put this words in this poem's commnt page and i will just monitor later, ok...kittettttttt...tmileeeeeeee

remarkable poem....a great insightful one....10

Looking forward and not below! But there's no difference between directions, as above, so below... You are right about possibilities and potentials, as described in the last stanza, but how many chances a desert has, in turning into a fertile land? On the whole, a very thought provoking write! Regards

hard luck to be feared always