Saturday, February 20, 2010

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Never give your soul to something
That will never give it back
I'm held together by a string
Won't put up an act
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Stefanie Fontker
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Me and Myself 20 February 2010

I bet there are many others out there that can relate to this poem. It's fascinating btw: ] However, try to avoid participles, such as -ed, and -ing endings. It would make the poem a lot stronger.

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