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awesome job-you have a cool style when you write-words that speak to me-a natural indeed-i would like to write with you sometime-again we both relate the same

I like the emotions in this poem I can almost feel your pain...

I AM ALSO CRYING WITH YOU MU HEART GETS RENDERED WITH A HEAVY THUNDER I AM YOUR TRUE ADMIRER

Heart wrenching piece you have written, Jenny.

My heart's been torn apart Where it was is now an empty void I'm now alone in this impenetrable space Crying naked on the floor................................ tears glean in eyes from core cry resounds over soul by the void, ......... most heart wrenching soliloquy that saddens deep wresting peace from within, brazen arrogance of fate plays its roll of ruining mirth and turning apart from room of repose, ecstasy crunches deep being soaked in pain, yet most poignant utterly passionate by sorrow in alienation, wrought ingenious by the imagery yet tearful 10++++, thanks for sharing

this poem brings me back to your family story.....it's a good poem but please don't be worried or sad while we are with you......10 for the fine work.....keep it up

excellent sad lyric poem...touching...........10+++++++

You have such a fascinating command of the English language, destined to blossom and splash perfumes, not tears, That I have noticed, Jen!