Through the valleys,
I walk...
its darkness threatens me not,
because life has suckled me bone-dry.
...
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Extraordinarily philosophical poem revered poet.Every disadvantage teaches us better and better lessons surely. no words I find to write my really felt feelings.Please carry on.
Last line sums up the positivity: Pleasure is ephemeral but wisdom is eternal. I liked it.5****
Good poem Gerald. Each time you have to pick yourself up, dust yourself down, and keep going.
Your poem connects two ends of emotion neatly.5 Stars.
thank you.