Sunday, May 28, 2023

Nothing Much Left Of Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

Through the valleys,
I walk...
its darkness threatens me not,
because life has suckled me bone-dry.
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Gerald Opio
COMMENTS
Juhaina Tumlu 29 May 2023

Your poem connects two ends of emotion neatly.5 Stars.

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Gerald Opio 29 May 2023

thank you.

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Nabakishore Dash 29 May 2023

Extraordinarily philosophical poem revered poet.Every disadvantage teaches us better and better lessons surely. no words I find to write my really felt feelings.Please carry on.

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Gerald Opio 29 May 2023

Thank yor for the positive comment. Life is our best teacher.

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M. Asim Nehal 28 May 2023

Last line sums up the positivity: Pleasure is ephemeral but wisdom is eternal. I liked it.5****

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David Wood 28 May 2023

Good poem Gerald. Each time you have to pick yourself up, dust yourself down, and keep going.

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