Friday, February 9, 2007

Nothing Left To Say Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything around me is silence
There is no one to hold me tight
Lonely coldness causes an internal violence
And nothing feels to be right
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Julianna HIMika666
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Jurietta Duraan 16 March 2008

I love the repetative phrase... beautiful poem with a lot of insight, and mature.

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Catastrophe King 23 February 2007

This nothingness in life is an amazing component that drives our emotions. You display immense power with your words. There is simplicity in your work. DO make a BOLD effort towards self-reliance! KUDOS to you for sharing those emotions with us.. it indeed was a good read,10 to you!

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