Everything around me is silence
There is no one to hold me tight
Lonely coldness causes an internal violence
And nothing feels to be right
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This nothingness in life is an amazing component that drives our emotions. You display immense power with your words. There is simplicity in your work. DO make a BOLD effort towards self-reliance! KUDOS to you for sharing those emotions with us.. it indeed was a good read,10 to you!
I love the repetative phrase... beautiful poem with a lot of insight, and mature.