Monday, June 6, 2011

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Rating: 4.3

It's amazing how you cannot see
The games you play, painful reality.
A constant torment, this emotional war
still you will defeat me
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RACHEL ZARANTONELLO
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 June 2011

Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived. Liked it. I rated it 10/10. Please read and write my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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