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long stretches of Time become painful in misery

The activity and motion pave a splendid handicraft of words. It is not easy to reach to the core and splash it as it is done here. The notes are welcome approach.

with the help of the poet's notes, the poem is a good record of this common phenomenon ////////// it is easy to express our feelings, but it is an art to express the feelings of others as our own ///////// though what i think about the last line outside the context is that many of us have lost time itself, what if you have nothing left but time? ///////// thank you sir for a nice poem- - - - rgds

Excellent poem, beautifully written.

nice poem..: -) Second last para, i liked..