Nothing last forever
The pain and the agony
The difficulties of life
Everything will pass away
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'Nothing stays permanent/ Nothing lasts forever'. These lines are true of the world, and they sum up your poem brilliantly.
Obstacles come and go like winter and summer come and go. we feel and tolerate cold and hotness. We overcome difficulties in life. Pain and agony do not last for long and go so far away. Nature can teach us many lessons on life. With the song of breeze we shall feel life with patience and tolerance. You have nice idea to present this poem...10
A most positive poem. Nice one. Top score