Thursday, March 12, 2009

Nothing Is Wrong Except Wrong Comments

Rating: 4.8

We'll need shelter if it storms
Following sunrise nightfall appears
Quiet earth quakes abruptly
Drizzle include thunder to ears
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Eyan Desir 17 March 2009

nice flow there good write

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Very cleverly written Persian. You are a gifted poet. Karin Anderson

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Indira Babbellapati 12 March 2009

nothing can be wrong....

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Chitra - 12 March 2009

Remarkable poem with an intriguing title...deep in tone

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Sally Plumb 12 March 2009

I agree with you.The title of your poem is so true.If you get a chance read 'Storm' Sincere regards to you in Iran.

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