Thursday, July 6, 2017

Nothing Is Left Comments

Rating: 5.0

Give me if anything is left for me
take back if something is left with me
I am planning the last adventure.
What should I give you now
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Khalid Saifullah 28 March 2018

A great poem on the last adventure, may God bless you with a long and healthy life!

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Nosheen Irfan 07 July 2017

You are at your best here. So wonderfully expressed. May God give you long life. A10

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Loke Kok Yee 07 July 2017

You have given us so much light Your poems are of great delight So there is no reason to cheat For you they have a special seat Thank you sir

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2017

Planning the last adventure is amazing and such feeling is tender in this expressive poem. Travelling in speed of light, life will be invisible. If something is left should be taken back along with all burdens. Soul is eager to join in eternal river. This poem expresses deep emotion. Very well crafted poem is shared on truth and on death topic. Death is truly mysterious....10

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