Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Nothing In My Heart Comments

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Devoid of everything that should matter
Yell in victory should my heart splatter
Yell because you have mastered the art
The art of tearing me apart
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Chey King
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Sara Tehrani 04 June 2009

great read...some powerful words there that really make u feel how the person being abused in the poem feels. really hits you....clearly uve got a gift for writing :)

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