Friday, August 5, 2005

Nothing I Can Do Comments

Rating: 3.5

I thought I was finally free of the horrid place
But now I sit here once again
Going crazy because there is nothing
I can do
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Madeline Fazio
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Adriana Cruz 13 August 2005

i know this feeling! i quite enjoyed this poem.

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John Kay 05 August 2005

Tough place to be, to be so powerless. Now that you have the feeling in hand marry it up with a metaphor. Do you ever feel like a tarred bird that wants its wings back?

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