Nothing Deserves Comments

We are all mortals, nothing deserves. We are all going to die.nothing deserves........yes we are all mortals and there is universal truth in it.. i likedd the idea....10 read mine noteasy..beauty.. entry

Dear Merna- each verse tells a whole STORY, each verse tells that this life is nothing, this life is just a long Journey... Nothing Deserves that's Right because everything comes and goes/ 10+++ Thanks For Sharing/

very wise.. few words but so intensive.. let your light be your guide..

I liked your poem merna, your ryhme and your way of writing.your poem is simple but it's really has a great meaning.10+++

you are eight, we cannot expect something from any human beings except God, merna.....merna.... you are really right.

i believe nothing deserves as you said....a nice piece...keep on writing Merna... :)

hmmm like it very much... inspiring a lot...it's very sweet and professionally done this poem with deep idea... yeah I am not wrong if I again say it that you are good poet with new subjects to express... sharing it if you will also like my expression of love based peace thoughts also(a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq) I am sure my this famous say will be satisfying your every worry about the humanity and social life and even friendship...yeah is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..good friend...go on and on...

yes we don't great expressions and the flow is amazing..superb write

oh that's pure wisdom....... excellent work

As u wrote nothing deserve but this poem really deserve something......it really deserve a great appreciation.

Wow........ We have a bunch of nice advices here from little 'old' girl Merna.

An honest piece, expressed very well...many will relate to this my friend..keep up the great work

yes Merna, very honest message in simple lines... i like it friend 10.. Ali

you expressed your feelings in short lines..i liked the poem.keep it up.10++for you

A fine poetic enumeration of opinion though i found the repeatition of phrase nothing deserve more redundant...fine ending for the theme....Thanks

A fourceful flow of faith that affects one's fate in a fantastic way.