Monday, January 19, 2009

Nothing Beyond Mercy Comments

Rating: 5.0

For the first time in 14 months
I went to the movies
afterwards we went to China New Star
myself and six friends.
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Charles Wax
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Martin O'Neill 19 January 2009

This is the first time I have read your work, it is very evocative and captures the feeling of the moment. The deftness of characterisation is excellent. Thank you for sharing this.

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Vincent James Turner 19 January 2009

what a joy to see you posting again, i dont know how long you have been back here but i remember when i first came to this site, and stubling upon your work, you are a master at this style of narrative poetry and when reading your work i always feel very close the scene you are potraying. great to read your work again best regards Vincent

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