Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Nothing At All Comments

Rating: 4.8

i gave my world
i gave my life
but got in return
nothing at all
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jahanvi .......................
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Gaurang Sevak 17 August 2009

amazing........really very nice.n its always happens to me like in dis poem.......thanx for this poem

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Pia Crawford 05 July 2009

I really like it. I'm able to relate to this and i like how you used repitition to add effect. It has a really nice flow to it, i enjoyed reading this (:

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Ted M 01 July 2009

Very true. It keeps happening, when the surprises stop.

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Viji Cool 01 July 2009

Nice one yaar keep goin on dear

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