Nothing Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Nothing

Rating: 5.0


The turquoise waters
Roar a laughter
At the fisherman's cove
Ravens join the fishmonger women
In the cacophony.
At a distance
A fishnet cast over
The waveless seas.
The man in the country fishing boat
Quivers in a prayer
As sun casts an angry look at him.
Nothing has changed
Nothing!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
soren Barrett 17 March 2022

It was a snapshot into life, a clip of reality, a vision of what is. Beautifully set and told

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

Wonderful appraisal of the poem, with a balanced insight. Thank you, dear poet. Much obliged.

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

I had noted two posts by Robert here, yesterday. And I had posted a rejoinder to one of his observations. But everything has disappeared. PoemHunter has taken charge of everything?

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

Such a deeply moving poem! .. Heart in hand and prayer! .. Powerfully and beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 March 2022

Dear Becca, it feels great to read you words, as always. Thank you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 March 2022

Beautifully crafted poem on life. Sometimes life is at standstill until the wind of fate blows in our corner. A great poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 March 2022

It is always a pleasure to read your observations on the poems. Rose Marie quietly picks us everything positive in the poem, meticulously and showcases them for the benefit of all the readers. How would we express our gratitude to you!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 March 2022

A very thought provoking poem with crystalline images and metaphors.

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 March 2022

I had responded to the posts of Words Out of the Mind here by a few rejoinders. But none of them is visible yet. Oh! ph, ph! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

May I request my favourite poet, Robert Murray Smith to post the comments once again.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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