Monday, July 18, 2016

Nothing 2 Comments

Rating: 4.5

"Nothing" is so hard to imagine,
For even empty space is something.
Nothing means "no thing",
Which means it cannot exist
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Paul Butters
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Eugene Levich 18 July 2016

Paul, congratulations on a wonderful, brain-tickling, poem. It made my day! I suggest this poem might be even stronger if one phrase were shortened: And then we have the anomaly Of sub-atomic particles I think could be changed simply to: Sub-atomic particles are an anomaly... Keep writing!

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Paul Butters 20 July 2016

Many thanks Eugene. Yes, scientific language can be very tricky in poetry. But I love those ideas out there.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 July 2016

There must be something! ! Nice work.

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Paul Butters 20 July 2016

Well there are good friends like you for a start, Edward.

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