Paul, congratulations on a wonderful, brain-tickling, poem. It made my day! I suggest this poem might be even stronger if one phrase were shortened: And then we have the anomaly
Of sub-atomic particles I think could be changed simply to: Sub-atomic particles are an anomaly... Keep writing!
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Paul, congratulations on a wonderful, brain-tickling, poem. It made my day! I suggest this poem might be even stronger if one phrase were shortened: And then we have the anomaly Of sub-atomic particles I think could be changed simply to: Sub-atomic particles are an anomaly... Keep writing!
Many thanks Eugene. Yes, scientific language can be very tricky in poetry. But I love those ideas out there.