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in the beginning............A vision to find In the beginning there is nothing You find it later there is something You find it interesting You remember it all while resting You soul is willing You develop some inkling You find something To take for nothing Is the hollow? Do you think and allow Does the heart dictate you to follow? Do the pride and honor you swallow You know it is pure attachment There is nothing like detachment It is pure and internal movement Happiness and joy for the moment Try for something new to create Rejuvenate self and recreate It may not be you fate Try for it before you are late Think it as blessings You will find nothing as missing Everything’s there for asking Be loyal and remove masking You will know what it looks like You may certainly go for in and never dislike It is universal truth What else you need as proof? He is there in every particle There is nothing like hollow or empty He has his presence everywhere We need some vision to find him somewhere

Genesis? , , (smile..) so..so short but can make us think on the whole thing.. in the beginning..the was no love? lol sends lots of thoughts... thoughts' provoking piece... or in the beginning..my brain is empty... really a mind-stirring write.. 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

he was empty...needed full...in feeling full...he knew...and grew. Thank You

too long poem, but it is well done 10

this is a beautiful art........cheers mam.....

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It's empty that I have to start with my thoughts and it just flick with this phrase.....you got me into it, to think in the beginning....simple....10

An exciting choice of phrase 'in the beginning' - - makes the reader's mind thnk of all kinds of 'beginnings' and therefore stimulates further writing - - - a clever shortest of short verse - - Fay

This is what I call a real short, short poem. If there was nothing then there is nothing to write about. Good poem. Lynn

haha...this is a funny piece Maybe I should write a poem like this but leave it without words Well I guess you are right But there was a God..... so there was one being.. In the begining there was God ha well its your poem......

THE BOOK OF GENESIS TELLS US THAT GOD CREATED EVERYTHING FROM NOTHING! -Raj

Yes in beginning true things and matters are slow and with emtiness, and they grow slowly to tall, otherwise...... voluminous starts are mostly not favourable and unable to stay for long,   

in the beginning there is empty..... nothing in thebegining.... new creations.... new thoughts new companions and humble begining with so many aspirations... lovely theme... i liked it most.....10 all dreams not come true.... a place called home

there is everything for nothing.' in the begining there is nothing' not every thing.wonderful idea.top honours for you surya