Sunday, March 14, 2010

Nothin But War (C) 3-14-2010 Comments

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Hold ya portion
Hold ya Trojan Horses
Explode the frozen force and
Make sure you stay on course when
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Zahir Kijani
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You got into rap in this in a big way, I think some stanzas would give the poem more power though. I also write huge chunky texts once also. We have our reasons for the way we write!

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Rachel Anderson 21 March 2010

'But who said we can’t switch the cards we’re dealt' best part of the poem :)

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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