Tuesday, October 22, 2013
Notes Of The Night Comments
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It was bothering him the noise that came at night from outhouse
He didn’t give it much notice in the barn was a lot of mouse
Just wondered why in the day he would hear none of the sound
But it all started with him on the bed and the lunar path westbound.
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Lorraine Colon
22 October 2013
Another great story - again I forgot my popcorn. I enjoyed reading this mysterious tale!
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7/27/2025 3:51:59 AM # 1.0.0
A very interesting write! You have succeeded in creating an eerie atmosphere and mainting the sense of suspense from the start! Beautifully rhyming with an anti climax!