Notes From The Night Comments

A great poem...really nice

'tis a pure poem/// 10

You already have Eric. I love the flow of this, the sincerity is ingrained in it. An honest poem from a wise poet.10 out of 10.

Pardner, here you have most certainly wrote many good lines of poetry (not to mention all the great ones in several other poems of yours!): and I must say this poem strikes deep, I enjoy R. M. Rilke very much also, and just as much so I always enjoy your work, keep writing Eric, I'm certain you have very many more good lines waiting to 'speak'.