Friday, May 6, 2016

Notebook's Lament Comments

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With the purest intent I've opened my pages to you,
Although blank, I've filled them with your waking thought.
Misinterpreting your passion for expression.
I excuse myself for asking how your day was going,
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Kewayne Wadley
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Wes Vogler 06 May 2016

This needs work but it is an eloquent idea. Please develop it further Our poor notebooks, how they suffer (slings and arrows) I like that your notebook has a temper.

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Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Groton, Connecticutt
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