Notbroken Comments

What a poem....you are talented be proud of your self...i rate it 10. Nyc work..Please read and comment on my new poem 'cry of a broken man'

WOW! thats passion...i love this poem..

You showed feel feelings in a deep way. I loved it

Amazing! I Love it! =)

The introduction is what prepares me for the poem and the poem is what puts me in love. If everything was written by you, everything will be so emotional and great. I love these piece. NICE JOB!

This is a very deep poem! The introduction is pretty amazing too. I think it's so true how 'life never stays frozen' and we as people need to just keep moving, so we cam continue on our path and find who really matters in our lives (: this is an excellent write on soulmates and how fate eventually leads us to them. Your words are truely beautiful. Keep up the good work: D! !

Because life never stays all frozen, so true, , , , , , , , the only thing that i dont like is your story seems a bit to redundent, still very good........

Thats amazing and so swweeeet!

You said I may read two, I I have read four and may still read more...you are just talented!

thank you for letting me read your poems. ' life never stays all frozen'... I'll keep that in mind :)

A very nice piece of work. Keep it up and let us learn from you as well. Thank you.

man u almost made me cry n u made me believe in true love. I love this poem so much

This is an astonishing poem, give so much hope to them who's lives are drowning. you aid a lot of people through their darkest thoughts. it's a great thing you are doing. keep it up brother!

I like that you include introductions.

Beautiful words from a beautiful spirit.

Beautifully beautiful my friend (: this has some very deep emotion in it, and it takes a lot to dive into that emotion and write it out into an amazing poem that the rest of the world can enjoy and be moves by. Oh, and the introduction is pretty great as well! Keep on writing: D

Very emotive, the last two lines.

I like this one the most. good write.

great man.I give you 10 for this

its really deep and worthy i really like it great job