Sunday, January 21, 2018

Not Yet Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

My day is not so long like a tedious tale,
as the tone is well known
thou; is not yet dawn,
but I rose from my nightmares
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Mohammed Abideen Oluwalonsola
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Yes! Its a fact! Thanks sir

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Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2018

A lovely new dawn is yet to come, let us wait for it.

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Thank you all @carmela, bonnie,and maryam

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Carmela Principe 10 March 2018

Maravilloso 3

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Bonnie Stewart 10 March 2018

Beautiful

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Maryam Shah 28 February 2018

What A Unique Successession Of Lines And Verse

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In addition,a big thanks to you all

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Thank you nifemi

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Scott Winkler 27 February 2018

Like it 10

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Scott Winkler 27 February 2018

This poem amaze me alot, looking forward to the success of the poem

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Nifemi Ola 18 February 2018

Cannot stop reading this its lovely

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JOSEPH 12 February 2018

excellent

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Ramson M. 09 February 2018

Lovely new year poem with a good setting

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