Sunday, October 23, 2011

Not Wrong Comments

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no war
is wrong
because always
we've had war
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Charles Helt
war
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Dave Walker 15 November 2011

A great poem like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Indian Brave.

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Poet Of The River 27 October 2011

haha nicely worded! yepper' cool word. hehe never herd it. the poem is short and simple. And in its simplicity lies a strong story. I would like to learn to write like that. I tend to run my poems on. Good job

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