Sunday, November 4, 2007

Not Whitman Comments

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She, too, would sing herself
if such a song seemed not so
presumptuous, indulgent.
She leaves her blades of grass
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Hans Ostrom
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Tom J. Mariani 05 November 2007

Walt was pretty full of himself. Impressed with his own breath. He presumes that if I will only hang with him I'll possess the origin of all poems. He is really asking to listen to my own voice. He just didn't know how to stretch the gender of his pronuns beyond 'any man hearty and clean' like you do.

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