Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Not To Be Lost Again! Comments

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Keeping me this distant
Talking to me this sweet
Off you go; out you sign;
Transmission loss between?
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Catrina Heart 16 January 2009

i felt so much pain and yearning here, though a bit of satiric mood for lifting your spirit...couldn't say more...still ten.

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Mamta Agarwal 15 January 2009

very romantic, full of longing, tenderness, sensousness, at times trying to bring in humour to lighten the theme, through use of imagery. totally a different genre of romantic poems- a sincerity of emotions 10 Mamta

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2008

that poem brought out the true yearning of alover- the voice and touch of the near and dear realy makes us up-lovely

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 04 October 2008

BLESSED IS THE HEART THAT LOVES...TRULY AND SINCERLY WITH NO MALICE... :) BFUL

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Richa Dhodi 11 May 2008

Sir your lines bonded me. And the way you have expressed is truely making it a remarkable piece sir.... Thanks for sharing ric..

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Usha Pisharody 09 April 2008

Ah! Lyrical, and again, a tongue in cheek tone! Audacious, yet subtly serious :) You have a natural flair, Sir!

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Abha Sharma 09 April 2008

the poem is full of sensuousness.. you through your lines making a reader see the beauty, hear the melody of the tunes.., touching the heart.. your lines will never sign off to the reader's mind... written with classiness and literary opulence...

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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