Friday, September 1, 2006

Not Suicide Comments

Rating: 5.0

her hands half hidden in her hair
curled tense against her pounding skull
could scarse restrain the throbbing there
her sensibilities grown dull
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moon batchelder
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Goldy Locks 01 September 2006

your rhymes work so well. and your rhythm makes this piece sing. superbly done.

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bemidji, minnesota
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