Thursday, December 8, 2005

Not-So-Easy-Rider Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Do you think I should get a motor-bike? '
said Gracie to her Mum.
'Not this year, dear, ' her Mum replied,
'Some books might be more fun'
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Michael Morris
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Bill Mitton 09 January 2006

Only seven, going on forty! That girl will rule the world by the time she's 21! Nice one Mike.

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Joseph Daly 05 January 2006

This is brilliant Michael, I am a sucker for the-twist-in-the-tail. Some might say that this has the Pam Ayers feel to it, I wouldn.t insult you that much. If anything I'm remindes of Chuck Berry's classic, 'Memphis, Tennessee'.

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Ernestine Northover 01 January 2006

That's a smasher of a poem and a lovely ending which was divine. Well done indeed. Thanks for posting. Love Ernestine XXX

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Cj Heck 08 December 2005

LOL, this is adorable, Michael. You had me there, right up to the surprise ending. Well done, LOL, well done. Warmest regards, CJ

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