Eyes closed in delight
Mind opened in doubt
Debt settled in past
Fragrance spread in galore.
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Wow! Not sure what's going on in this poem Sekharan, but it's awesome! Poets shouting with guns, sounds a little scary lol.
He was at her sight Sat aside her right Right below her knee Not settled so far... i like! ! ! :)
brilliant poem or should i say a perfect wholesome story with nothing left to disappoint....bravo sir
settling scores an be tricky watch that gun it might go off. trick lines makes the poem interesting
A lovely poem I enjoyed reading. I invite you now to read some of mine.
It seems scores not yet settled, that too a poet shouted with as powerful as gun. Very beautiful poem.Loved reading it.
I am just speechless.A vivid pen-picture.It's like Joydev's Geetgobindam- - - Dehi podo-pallava-mudaram! But not settled, because, there's confusion, dubiousness.Fab.10+++++