Friday, August 16, 2013

Not Settled So Far Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eyes closed in delight
Mind opened in doubt
Debt settled in past
Fragrance spread in galore.
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sekharan pookkat
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Neela Nath Das 08 October 2013

I am just speechless.A vivid pen-picture.It's like Joydev's Geetgobindam- - - Dehi podo-pallava-mudaram! But not settled, because, there's confusion, dubiousness.Fab.10+++++

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Beach Girl 19 August 2013

Wow! Not sure what's going on in this poem Sekharan, but it's awesome! Poets shouting with guns, sounds a little scary lol.

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Zandile Zoya 19 August 2013

He was at her sight Sat aside her right Right below her knee Not settled so far... i like! ! ! :)

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Payal Parande 17 August 2013

brilliant poem or should i say a perfect wholesome story with nothing left to disappoint....bravo sir

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2013

settling scores an be tricky watch that gun it might go off. trick lines makes the poem interesting

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David Wood 16 August 2013

A lovely poem I enjoyed reading. I invite you now to read some of mine.

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Geetha Jayakumar 16 August 2013

It seems scores not yet settled, that too a poet shouted with as powerful as gun. Very beautiful poem.Loved reading it.

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