Monday, July 7, 2008

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It was cold, your hands we're shaking && I stepped in front of you just to wrap my arms around you as I said 'let's pretend winter isn't here'as you buried your head in my shoulder you said...
'lets pretend the snow isn't the only thing falling fast'

Who would've thought
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millie st.claire
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that was perfect you are vary talented vary good even tho it was like a book it was vary good you should be a book writer

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Aiden Florence 07 July 2008

This totally qualifies for the lyrics of a new hip-hop song. Nice.

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Joey Habib 07 July 2008

that was phenomenal... you have some raw talent thats hard to find... you wanted the truth there you go... dont ever let someone or something hold you down life is real so be real and real is what you will get...keep your head up and keep it moving...

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