Monday, November 16, 2009

Not Ready To Say Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

neither one of us was ready to say goodbye.
but we knew that it was my time.

there are so many things
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louis rams
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Matt Mooney 17 November 2009

'Look into my eyes and you will see All the love inside of me.' An intimate meeting of souls.10.

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t6his poem is good.. dont leave yet

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Deborah Cromer 16 November 2009

Sad but strong. This is a touching work that speaks from the heart. Nice piece and so full of feeling. Good work. Debbie

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Kranthi Pothineni 16 November 2009

Words free flowed out while reading this write. Expressive. Ending line is really good.

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