Monday, June 29, 2015

Not Quite Perfect Comments

Rating: 4.5

It's not the fevered loving that makes a heart so bold
But a must for lust worth having that dies once you are old

Unleash the glaring dagger to plunge into my soul
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Broaden Rawd
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Chinedu Dike 03 July 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Broaden Rawd 03 July 2015

Thanks a bunch.

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