Not Quite A Dream Comments
My eyes slide slowly off the screen of the computer
To stare blankly at its reflection on the surface of my tea.
I tap the cup, and the reflection ripples. Looking up again,
I see my computer rippling, too, and as as translucent as the sea.
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Well done carrying the theme throughout the poem and leading up to your final statement of an experience we do not share every day (touching and holding) and at the same time noting our failure (unaware of who) and need (wonder) .
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8/4/2025 2:44:43 AM # 1.0.0
very nice. lovely concept. makes me think of Roger McGough's poem about the bus and the end of the world! Thanks.